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the birth of surrealism

 

He said that I was his dream

painted in real colors

not floresent hues

 

he painted me there and then

Author notes

im sorry

written-in-ink

sureal

gah

this sucks sis

A contest entry

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  • Hell In Harmony
    October 27, 2008
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    BLE.






    i agree with mesmerized--x


  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    I feel like you had a lot to say and you couldn't say it in 20 words, like I feel that there should be more to this write. but otherwise I still liked it especially the beginning. great imagery!

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • hks
    October 21, 2008
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    lol. i have a point.!!!!!

    can ur poems have content please?