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Surreal Semantics

S lithering thoughts that drip onto their given medium
U surping all established confines of normalcy
R evealing the ugly core in esoteric beauty
R endering forth the utmost real unreality
E ach enigma from electric eclectic  eccentrics
A stounding all awareness of absolute anomities
L ounging under liquid lizard like light.

Author notes

prompt 1. Surreal - my perception of this embraced concept.




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  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    I liked this a lot. your take on the prompt was very unique. I do like the original better, because it was probably your first write and then you had to shorten it to 20 words which must've been difficult. but otherwise your use of alliterations was amazing.

    thanks for entering and goodluck

  • Asabouros.
    October 24, 2008

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    ...I like the original better I think, *nods* Yeah, I do. Just more Surreal and wonderful....*nods* Yeah. ...