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If I were your girl

If I were your girl
and you, my guy
We'd spend time looking at the stary sky
Holding hands and never saying good-bye
test, tease and play
We'd talk every day
You'd be my world
Though you couldn't tell
we'd Hug, kiss and cry
If I were your girl
and you, my guy
Too attached too soon
you'd know me inside and out
couldnt go a day without
And we'd always be

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  • Eusebius
    November 17, 2008

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    bravo

    Short, neat, nifty, snappy, with fine rhyme, a poem that is a real bunch of fun, indeed! Loved it a ton! bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • wolfpuppy
    October 21, 2008
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    very good


  • allfall4u
    October 21, 2008
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    Awww... I like this.
    It is very sweet.