Everything that was once shades of blue
slowly illuminate hues of pink
purple, orange
red
until regrettably
shades of night
A contest entry
- 20/20 [prompt inspired QUICKIE♥ by etoile.
525 points, ended October 27, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW...what a beautiful piece...I watched the [colors change with every word.
Shelly
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Thank you Shelly, for such a lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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good take on the prompt. I liked your use of all the colours in this piece. the first line was nicely written. and I really liked the ending.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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I like how this unfolds and the way you paint the scene so vividly. I can see it clearly. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
Yes, but there is nothing more beautiful and serene than a vivid sunset with such lovely shades of red, pink and lavender.
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well except for me, lol. sorry couldn't resist.
Thank you Kevin.
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I think that this is just as beautiful as can be I love the sunsets in the late summer and fall the best thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest be well
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Thank you very much, such lovely comments warm the soul.
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Lovely. I agree, a great take on the prompt...such an interesting style, and it all flows together...
Smile♫
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thank you
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And as it goes, everything eventually comes to an end. Nicely done for the sunset prompt.
Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you, A beautiful sunset is like a good movie, you want to watch it over again, lol. Thanks for coming by and reading and commenting on my poem, I really appreciate it.
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