Pallets of color's spew forth,
upon a blank canvas inspiring,
an inovational display
of magnificent brush strokes,
birthing amazement.
Author notes
20 words
sunset - prompt
A contest entry
- 20/20 [prompt inspired QUICKIE♥ by sidereal.
525 points, ended October 27, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
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So very beautiful. I love this. Congratulations on the Bronze
Well deserved. Your take on the prompt was amazing and to create such vivid imagery in just 20 words? Stunning!
Keep it flowing.
Much love
Ylova
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I liked your take on the prompt, the imagery you used made it unique in its own way. I loved the this entire piece especially the first line and last line. great strong beginning and ending.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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how many times have i heard a sunset compared to painting? A trillion times.
But don't get me wrong, this is well written--you obviously have talent--but the idea is a little tired in my opinion.
The best metaphor in this is the last one, "birthing amazement"--that one paints a great image and I immediately see the sun crowning over the horizon.
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Oh wow. This is lovely!
Good luck in the contest
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Beautifully done. This definitely sets an artis's image to the mind of even the most plain of thoughts. Wonderful.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm -
...birthing amazement...I love that and a splendid use of personification, great job!
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