Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Her Wedding Chamber Minstrel

Missing image

i, chambray draconian wandering messiah
of wounded roadways shredded discontent
calamity's dandelion; whimsical velvet pariah
sachrine cavity, devoid of magnificent
weeping shroud, a maniac's dilemna
come my virgin bride mantled in henna
malevolent catastrophe a hymn of mosaic
come enter tomb, with scarlet womb, lady prosaic
come, my queenling, come, come
cannot you hear raging drum?

i, lustful innocent, dread spontaneous combust
while sorcery's brethern kneel before guillotine
desrirous of modesty's succor, malachite angel entrust
do not cower, my queen, our love is not obscene
lose your gowns of gossamer wanton mocking
cast off your ribbons, gloves, slippers, stockings
quintessential furred altar, flicking serpent tounge greet
come, your groom, devour your perfume, all sin obsolete
come, dearest darkling, come come
carnality's christening, my succulent plum

betrothal's mannequin disjointed amputee
slick sheath of dreams, diaphanous urbane
delicate arousal; blossomed orgasmic filagree
your peach umber shadows i delve; mysteries insane
set as a jewel in my crown, queenie, my lover
your charms a shivering pastel violence discover
elemental vibrancy long sought, oh queen, my queen
orbs; fringed memories of violet sparkling mesmerines
come, with me to impossible room, cobwebs swept by broom
come, my own, decaying destiny, come come
we shall arrive, my pleasured bride, with much aplomb
come, no hesitate my opiate, now, come
come, with me, come...











In a list

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10
  • mimiagatha
    July 20

    Edit | Reply
    your richness of language is incredible, you have a style of your own and a rhyme of your own, and this poem is, damn if i don't mean it, lustfully mesmerizing


  • Swan song gold member
    December 26, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Wow I liked this my head is spinning!!!! Well done and good luck in the contest


  • Lowell Poe
    November 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I find this amazing...
    I never read anything quite like it lass...
    the style...everything about it was enthralling!

    Much luv little gypsy,
    Lowell


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Wow

    I am amazed at the Vocab, that is awesome great flow and imagery. blessings and great write

    Rend


  • Sheli silver member
    October 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    SPLENDIFEROUS!

    Thank you all, so very kindly, for your comments! I really appreciate your time and energy!

    PEACE


  • LaylaLace
    October 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    So many words embellish this already lustruous poem! Like jewels on silk...heh I should remember that one lol.

    It is so beckoning, so surreal, and slightly dizzying lol.

    Beautiful.


  • lunarlunacy
    October 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    quite the linguistic playground here. groovy.


  • spideracer gold member
    October 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Mind twister

    Wow what a mind twister, I'll have to look up some words at a later time. Overall I did understand your poem, it sure was different and one I'm compelled to read again and again. I'm sure it will be much clearer for me once I've looked up words I need to. Very dark and erotic, full of wonderfully morbid imagery, such a pleasure to read and reread.

1 - 10 of 10