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Inside This Aching Heart

Inside this aching heart
Is a fire, burning so fierce,
Burning for you
The fire of love
That never dies
Is alive in me now
Don't let it burn out
Keep the fire of love
Burning
Inside this aching heart

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  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    October 22, 2008

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    wow kwalk, this was an amazing poem you wrote. i understand it completely, for i've been there and felt this way about a guy once. This took my breath away and i loved the sense of love and imagery in this. way to go and keep it up!


  • liveyourlife27
    October 21, 2008

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    awww...darling are you ok? is about you know who? if u want to talk im so here for you