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No Solice in Sunsets

There is no solice in sunsets;
Fools defend their splendor.
The sun retreats, radiance in tow,
Stealing back it's warmth.

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  • ChelseySmile
    January 19
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    Beautiful imagery. Short and sweet.
    I loved your word choice.


  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    this was a nice write. I liked your take on the prompt. good imagery in this write as well. the last two lines were my favourite.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 20, 2008
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    A different approach to the prompt, but it fits.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Storm


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 20, 2008
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    A totally different perspective, great take on the prompt, thanks for the read. Good luck!