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You taught me love

Lost in your eyes
The rivers to your heart
Reflecting the skies
And the love they impart

For they are only yours
Your perfect feature
From substantial stores
My stunning teacher

Author notes

A great idea for a contest (sorry if my poem has nothing to do with autumn...) I wrote the poem based generally on the reflection of the trees and sky in the water, which took my breath away, much like the love of my life.

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  • heismysong
    November 5, 2008

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    Pretty Eyes

    I liked this- short and simple, and love that goes deep. It's the way it should be.

    Thank you for entering!

  • Kitch
    October 24, 2008

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    wow

    i really like how this one flows. It seems to be a tribute to anyone who has fallen in love for the first time.
    Well done and good luck

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