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My Sunset

Light ending
In diverse colors
Colorful rainbows lie
Where the sun once slept
Clouds blooming 
Like roses they fall 
sunset

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Stevie.me
    November 6, 2008
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    Good Job

    Im big into imagery so i really like it.
    Nice, short and sweet
    It's wonderful


  • etoile
    October 27, 2008

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    great take on the prompt. this poem had beautiful imagery throughout which was great. I like the 3rd and 4th line best. this was a nice write.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 20, 2008

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    Care to share this sunset? I only want a little piece! LOL
    Nice imagery, paints the scene well.

    Good luck in the contest.
    Storm


  • Learning2PaintYou
    October 20, 2008
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    This is a great poem!


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 20, 2008
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    A beautiful piece!

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