~ Come and play with me ~ by YoursTrulyJulie at All poetry

I'm having so much fun here
See me sitting on my rear
Oh what a blissful feeling
This water's so appealing

As it splashes on my head
Blow it out my trunk instead
Won't you come and play with me
So much fun...you would agree

This is just the best of fun
And the day has just begun
You're my best friend,that is true
It's more fun when there are two.

Author notes

I have chosen option # 7

In a list

d) My Honorable Mentions • next in list

A contest entry

Humour in Nature - Contest Two by AnnD. 1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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AnnD
November 3, 2008

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Awww. i love this so much. It is an amazing image and just lends itself to a big smile. Your poem totally reflects that fun. Thankyou so very much for entering. I love this write.

Ann
- YoursTrulyJulie
  November 3, 2008
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  Thank you. I'm pleased you liked my poem and thank you for the HM in your contest
LAPoe
October 23, 2008

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Hey who told you, you could take a picture of me in the shower? rub a dub dub it's got to be one heck of a big tub!

doc... hey my grin came back!
- YoursTrulyJulie
  October 23, 2008
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  1...2...3...Here I come to join ya doc Prepare yourself for a big SPLASH
  Thanks again for your comment and s
peridotPixi
October 22, 2008

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this is a wonderful poem and a cute picture and background everything is more fun with two. i love the rhyme. I'm a rhymer tooo, keep writing, ~Amy
- YoursTrulyJulie
  October 22, 2008
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  Thank You
  It is a cute picture isn't it Thanks for your great comment and applause
ears2hearyou
October 21, 2008

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loved it!
I looked this picture a long time too...just enjoying it!
the sheer freedom of it!
you made us all want to put our elephant trunks and
jump right in!
fun..fun...great job!
ears/Seattle
Legend
October 21, 2008

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wonderful
I Don't blame you for selecting this image it is i think the best one to interpret You have done a fine job with it I really enjoyed the read Good luck in the contest
AliceinPoetryLand
October 21, 2008

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Aww love it The picture is gorgeous and you have given it life! Your rhyme is excellent as always. I love reading your poems
All the best with this
Gaylene
DolphinLass
October 20, 2008
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aw very cute fun poem, good luck
- YoursTrulyJulie
  October 21, 2008
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  Thank you I appreciate your comment and applause
Angels Whispers
October 20, 2008

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So Cute
Hi Julie, hugs to you sweet one
You have penned here a very cute poem and the picture fits your words so beautifully.This would make a very good childrens poem.I wish you all the best in the contest my friend.
Take care and much love to you.
your Aussie angel friend,
~Angel-Anne~
- YoursTrulyJulie
  October 20, 2008
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  Thank you Anne
  Thank you for taking the time to read my poem I truly appreciate you taking the time to read, comment and applaude
Katie Lazette
October 20, 2008
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This is really a cute little poem. It fits the picture. Good luck in the contest. Katie
- YoursTrulyJulie
  October 20, 2008
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  Thank You
  Thank you for taking the time to read my poem I appreciate your comment and applause
Recluse Writer
October 20, 2008

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You Know I loooooove this pic babe
You have done it justice with great rhyme.
MWAH
CUZ
- YoursTrulyJulie
  October 20, 2008
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  Thanks Cuz !
  I'm pleased that you liked my poem and thanks for your great comment and happy s