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Sleeping in memories of sleepless nights

Why do I still dream of eyes
Bright as pennies,
With that same dirty green-copper
Dulled shine.

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  • solarjinx
    October 23, 2008

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    wow, I've never seen anything so short from you before! it's actually quite nice, like a neatly trimmed vagina. I like the feel of this.. poem.