On again
Off again
You say it's real
I think pretend
Be my lover
Be my friend
When will this cycle ever end?
On again
Off again
Love's a fact
Not a trend
You mean to "woo"
But you offend
So we're on again
Off again
Author notes
this is alot shorter than the poems i've been writing lately...i kind of like it. im not sure what it really is. i guess it could be a song, alot of people have mentioned it would sound good as a song, so i guess ill make it a song. 
option 8
Mylee
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Thank you for reading the rules. This is short, but simple, straight, and to the point. I really feel with what you're saying in this. Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest and best of luck in my contest!
ing alone,
Mylee -
If it's going to be such a constant back and forth, I'd say that I was getting off this teeter-totter. No one deserves to be jerked around like that. I agree with the others mentioned, that it would sound good as a song. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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aww thats cute! and it has really good rhythm! you should seriously right some more verses to it. good luck.
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when i looked at the title, i just had to ask my self "hm...wonder what this is about!" keep writing hun. it makes great medicine.
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Wow I really like this. Reads like a song to me. Keep writing!
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