the daylight brings such sweet repressions,
tender love under sunlight glows so bright,
but oh, how the mood changes when day turns to night,
the perfect mask melts into moonlight's shade
as reality sets in of our love's fade
we've managed this long with no concussions
now can we do right, with paintbrush in hand
and paint the true atmosphere for this dear land?
for although our love was once strong and true
the birds now sing for a new love for you
Author notes
prompt:
3. I wrote a smile sonnet, but at night turned it into free verse sorrow.
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A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST. by penman.
900 points, ended October 21, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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beautifully worded and wonderful rhyming, The imagery was amazing,
fantastic. -
i really like this you did a wonderful job here... thank you for sharing this and good luck to you in this contest........ hugs
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