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Passions wave ( Bronze )

Soft sensuality fragrance oceans mist,

femininity of waves,

caressing ...

 

Stillness falls into silence,

a glance, surreal

reflecting mirrored dreams.

 

 

Floating in seas of passion,

lovers dance,

rhythmical in sheets of liquid aqua..

 

gently touching,

smoothly guiding,

consummating our love,

tonight...

Author notes

"love is like a ripple in the ocean, it touches everything." -- Kat's quote..

40 to 60 words

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  • penman gold member
    November 3, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very creative and so well crafted. Congratulations on the bronze. It was well deserved.


  • maralisa silver member
    October 21, 2008

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    a delightful poem julie your imagery is wonderful I love the quote you did a fantastic take on it as always congratulations on your shiny my friend *rose maralisa


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    Absolutely Beautiful...

    Soft, tender & sensually enticing...
    Wonderful imagery as always (fore that is your gift)...
    Another fantastic write that enthralled throughout...
    Felt it, lived it, loved it...
    Well done!!!


  • Alyzeh
    October 21, 2008

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    This was a stunning piece. So sensual. The background and the title go perfectly with the poem and add to its feel. Congratulations on the bronze! =D


  • chilali
    October 20, 2008

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    Yay! Congratulations on the Bronze! This is a very beautiful piece!! I love the vivid imagery and the lovely flow throughout the poem. Very nice take on the prompt Julie! Thank you ever so much for sharing this with me!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful piece that you've penned. the imagery is lovely and vivid. so much love can be felt with each word that's here. You've done an excellent job with this prompt. this one brings a smile to my face and warms my heart.

    good luck

    kat


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    aaaaaaaaaaah, this is just wonderful. Light and airy read with its phenomenal flow. Sensual imagery. Excellent all around! Good luck in the contest!


  • Topaze
    October 20, 2008
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    Very nice, a lovely piece indeed, best wishes in the contest.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    October 20, 2008

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    oooooooooooo lala i like this alot hehhe... great job...... hehe..... thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest....!

  • Bob Fox
    October 20, 2008

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    Julie

    And the vision that crosses my mind is one of a salacious lady naked and awaiting the tender exploration of her body. Oh boy maybe I should not have said that. lol


  • daviscth silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    This reads so smooth and gentle Julie. The imagery is just amazing and has a beautiful sensual touch. I love the background too. Good luck in the contest.

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