Tense
Tongue tied
Troubled, totally terrified
Spirit sinking without defense
All because you abandoned me
Come back, bring back my ecstasy
In a list
A contest entry
- Get Prompted On Faber Drive by Errant Panther.
710 points, ended November 22, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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heartfelt and beautifully written
Ty for entering!
Lynda
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ty for extending your entry to comply. this now reads as a much deeper thought process was behind its composition, a pleasant read - best wishes to you.
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you might wish to revise this as I stated in rules no less than 20 words.
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