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Drain Brain




The actions seem unclear,
as the market numbers fall,
crying for a transfusion,
can you hear the reapers call.

Government backed loans,
with funds that don’t exist,
deceit now gets a pay of,
how long can this persist.

Economy in deaths spiral,
is sucking down the drain,
an example not to follow,
thoughts of a spiraling brain.



















































































Author notes

6. Down the drain within the brain.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 28, 2008

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    love your flow and rhyme here my dear, your words flow smoothly and it is wonderful to read them all.

    Ra


    • Topaze gold member
      October 28, 2008
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      I fall in love with you deeper each passing day, this is all new ground for me as no one has ever touched me like you do. You are so wonderful my fine lady, I love you so my Joann.


  • penman gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • Venugopal gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    so true to present crisis. Keep it up!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 20, 2008

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    Moment in time well captured. Major brain drains on Wall St right now. Great take on the prompt, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

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