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Young again

Night whispered my name in a
voice I knew all to well.
It touched my soul and called
on my heart to find the reason.
Midnight came and I dressed
in nothing but a blanket
tip toed down my stairs
and into the night and pouring rain.

I thought my mind has played it's
trick on me well until I seen the shadow
move and there you where.
Dressed in all black and dripping wet.
I could feel the drops run down my back
I did not care for only you in my vision.
Pulling the blanket off my shoulders
in a invitation to come get me.

I know I smile, I know I glow in the soft
light that made it like a fairy tale.
Taking a step in my direction
I throw caution to the wind
pick up my feet and meet you half way.
Coming together lips, hands and hips.
The folds of my protection spun and
welcomed you into my silken embrace.

It was perfect that night in the middle
of a winter storm, wind to blow my hair,
rain to slick skin, sweet and salt.
I stood with my breast pressed to your chest,
tears and rain to wash my face
for I did not think I would see you this night.
Took in very moment for I knew there
would never be another like this.

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True Story that I keep close to my heart for all times.

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  • aldebaran
    October 22, 2008
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    u should keep it close to u. this happens not to everybody... cherish it.


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      October 22, 2008
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      Thank you handsom, it was a pleasure to share with the likes of you.


  • Bohemianwriter
    October 21, 2008

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    omg this was amazing i loved everything about it, this is just what i was looking for in this contest and you've nailed it! GREAT WRITE!

    THANKS FOR ENTERING AND GOOD LUCK!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Very well written and I enjoyed this read alot! What a true story I would be holding it close to my heart to Good luck in the contest!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    mmmmmmmmmm

    Delicious

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