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A Spell of Eternity

Skys all a gloom but a sweep of the broom
brushs charged
bonds are broken this night
wind blowing pages
are magically caught
grasped
holds a scattering
paints patterns so flattering
charms enticingly called.

chantings held
sings to the spirits
stomps to the crescenting moon
individually masked
marks out from the rest
stooping to beats
feet in both worlds croon

message for the stars scribed in light
words forged forever alive
in a clear voice spoken
walking lands often trod
harvested, feastings,
the faith still imbibes

closer come closer
the secret's immense
self preservations the game
decorations adorn
festivities named
sky full of stars
and so it  remains
stength and will
in this webbed world of dew
powerful magic here now to brew

processional march
affirm covens commitment
wisdoms cast in powerful sound
shares hearts fired soul
care, we should always,
so tell their tale and
shout it out loud
tears are mixed in awareness glowing.
There ~
the spells been cast
and told in the knowing

Author notes

'I did not harm any animals in the writing of this spell' s

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  • penman gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • Darkwell
    October 26, 2008

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    This Salvio Hexia charm weaved into this wonderful chant is a powerful protection within the circle. This student has masterfully called upon the elements to strengthen the covens power and defences. An award of a case of bertie bots every flavor beans and 15 points to griffindor


    • libithina
      October 28, 2008
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      Oh my favorites

      bertie bots each one sets the taste buds a sizzle
      much humbled as a cheer rang out from griffindor .. Yay !!
      truly an honour indeed.
      Respect Lib x x x


  • WolfHeart
    October 22, 2008

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    Frenetic energy with thoughts coming at the reader from all directions. Your words do cast a spell as the reader hunts for ever nuance and bit of meaning. Very well done.


    • libithina
      October 28, 2008
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      Happy smiles

      Dearest Wolfie, I love it when you visit
      this has cast a spell of many happy smiles for me
      s you
      Lib x x x s

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