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Your Promises Are Lies

Fuck you, I hate you, I hope you burn in hell,
I hope you get what you deserve, but only time will tell.
You promised me you loved me, and said that you'd be there,
Then you crumbled the earth beneath me, and you didn't even care.
You spun your web of lies, said I was the only one,
But I wasn't and you were out with her, having fun.
I know you'll get what you deserve, it would only be fair.
Thanks for pretending that you loved me, when you really didn't care.
Every word you said, turned out to be a lie,
Now as I sit here crying, I sincerely hope you die.

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  • debulm
    November 4

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    relevant

    hey, for school I have to write an essay about lying and how it harms people, so I decided to look at some poetry about lying and... this is relevant. I am sorry for your pain -- I assume this poem is real -- but thanks for the insight. Lying is hurtful.


  • daffodilblossom
    November 17, 2008
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    bravo

    i tell u wat sumtime i feel that way bout certain peeps