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Superman meets his match and then ignites

Mercury shoes carry me far afield from you
and for a moment I am but a streak of blue

I've simply circled the globe to meet your behind
and if you don't notice me well then you must be blind

I've got super powers granted to but a few
and I'm not even an inch close to being through

Yet I'd be invincible with our strengths combined
for you hold such beauty by vision undefined

 

 

 

 

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5. Come on catch me if you can, but even if you don't I'll pretend you did.

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  • penman gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • Kiddy
    October 21, 2008

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    Dear mark, you have done a great job with rhyming.
    Highly thoughtful and it gives a good read...

    Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest...

    Love
    -Kiddy


  • Venugopal gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    great! keep writing


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    I can't see how anyone could pen anything better than this for the prompt!!


  • Cannonsfire
    October 20, 2008

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    Do ya wear your underpants on the outside?? huh huh?? Well do ya???


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 20, 2008

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    This is a great take on your prompt. It's whimsical until the last line, then it's so sweet. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • lunarlunacy
    October 20, 2008
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    Witty write hoss.

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