My life
it is a dark
and scary place
it is without air
void of soul
evil tainted sore place
since there is no air
no one can hear you scream
no one can see how
dead you have become
You blend into the shadows
and begin to fade from exsistence
Author notes
40 - 60 words
Artist credit: http://bumimanusia.deviantart.com/art/Lilac-101283830
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest.. You Up For The Challenge?? by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended October 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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Beautiful picture and a lot said in a minimum of beautiful words---
Very well portrayed---The picture is quite beautiful
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this is a very sad poem that you've written. a place I was at before. I'll never forget, a place that hurts like hell. you've done an excellent job expressing yourself with your emotions and with your words.
good luck
kat
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Nicely done. Very powerful. As always I am sad to see your pain, but I appreciate the ability you have to express yourself poetically.
Mike -
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thank you so much for your very kind words..... hugs
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Wonderful work here. Such a sad
take on the prompt. Good luck to you
here my friend!
Jeremy0826 -
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thank you for your kind words as always.. hugs....
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I think that you did a great job with the picture good luck to you in the contest best wishes and much love always be well
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thank you hun.... hugs...
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