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Nocturnal

Missing image

The moon her pearl

night her rhapsody,

strolling lavender blooms

within her mind,

somewhere beyond her prison

they flower in intensity.

 

She’ll wander a wisp,

passion’s astral apparition,

walking by desire,

lovers communing among the field,

every eve entwined in harvest,

by morn they’ll be memories

of faces in history books,

sorceress of lilac

never restrained to intimacy with living.

 

Author notes

60 words
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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    the imagery throughout this write is amazing. I really love it. this is a wonderfully calming piece that I truly enjoyed reading. Outstanding job on both the prompt and your poem

    good luck

    kat


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Beautiful
    Gentle and serene
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 20, 2008

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    Wonderful work with this picture my friend!
    Good luck to you and keep it up. Thanks a
    lot for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • MysticalRayne
    October 20, 2008

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    This is absolutely beautiful my friend - your words weave magic... best of luck in Kats contest


  • trekkergirl
    October 20, 2008

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    ohhhhh this is soooo good. I love the imagery that you use here. The idea of lovers meeting and the idea that by morn they would be nothing but memories. Another excellent write my friend. Nothing less than I expect from you.

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