It only took one look,
the wheels began to turn,
in life’s circle of love,
how high the flames burn.
Time moves in ripples,
in a never ending flow,
there’s no time to stand still,
to enjoy loves afterglow.
You can try if you wish,
it can never be stopped,
for love is invincible,
it simply can’t be topped.
Author notes
"love is like a ripple in the ocean, it touches everything." -- Kat's quote
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest.. You Up For The Challenge?? by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended October 20, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love your soft and gentle ways, that make my heart skip a beat. The way your words warm my soul. You are so very much loved.
Ra
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this is a wonderful poem that you've written, I truly enjoyed reading it. You did an outstanding job with this prompt. the second stanza is the one that I loved the most of all.
good luck
kat
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Such love and gentleness... a wonderful interpretation... Bravo Karl!
Ken
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Such a wonderful poem
The rhythm and the flow
Love is a wonderful gift to share
Best wishes to you
Julie
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So true and a wonderful thought
for this prompt my friend! I hope that you
do well with this one here. Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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