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Sometimes

Sometimes doubt creeps on in, sometimes doubt is at the door,
Sometimes i find my mind wandering from You.

Sometimes i find i am doing things wrong,
Sometimes i find i am walking away.

Never i find You away from me,
Never i find You away from me.

You are there through it all,
You care about me even though i sin.

You care about me all the time,
You will never abandon me.

You are there no matter what,
even though i sometimes fall.

Please be up front and honest and tell me what you think.

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