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...where you are

Any sea may be overcome
so long as soul is allowed dream
held within heart's serene strum
like a precious sweet lunar-beam
eaten completely by senses
your deep comeliness dispenses




Distance dilutes no portion
of love felt full proportion
in paths we were meant to walk
no matter how cruel seems clock

Though some spans are very far
this heart exists where you are
 
 
 
 
 

Author notes


"love is like a ripple in the ocean, it touches everything." -- Kat's quote

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Aww bro.. this is so beautiful!! Sigh.. you are such an awesome talent!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    this poem is beautiful, filled with words of love. written from the depths of your heart. this one really tugged on my heart strings, and really hit hard in the last two lines. I know that your heart is with her as well. never give up the hope that you have. Brilliant poem and excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck

    kat


  • sailor ptolema
    October 20, 2008

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    finally! lol. you can't make a reservation without rocketboom, it's inconceivable


  • sailor ptolema
    October 20, 2008
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    eh hem... donde esta "ROCKETBOOM!"...?


    • Xianaria gold member
      October 20, 2008
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      it's his way of reserving a spot he confused a lil girl once who thought it was his user name...she tried sending him his prompt & couldn't find rocketboom anywhere


    • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
      October 20, 2008
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      Por favor Refresh

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