Lavender sketches midnights canvas;
as the moon silhouettes a delicate frame.
Lilac scents gently invade her inner being,
arousing her femininity;
a peek a boo negligee accentuates a desirable frame.
Hue's of mauve speckled in dew,
cling to bare skin;
as she envisions her lovers hand tracing his fingers,
through her cascading tendrils.
Author notes
40 - 60 words
http://bumimanusia.deviantart.com/art/Lilac-101283830
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest.. You Up For The Challenge?? by K a t.
1200 points, ended October 20, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
What a terrific creation for the picture. Congratulations on the honorable mention. -
I remember reading this before. I am surprised I did not comment though. This is incredible. I love the imagery. Your take on the picture was
WOW! Congrats on the HM.
Keep it flowing.
Much love
Ylova
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Oh wow. I loved this. Wonderful take on the prompt. The words flow so beautifully.
Excellento!
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the imagery that you've created with this piece is amazing and I'm in awe.. I absolutely love this poem. I love lines 3 & 4, and 8 & 9. Excellent take on the prompt.. Fantastic job with the poem
good luck
kat
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I awe in the brilliance of words
Painted in delicate hues
Best wishes hun
Julie
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Wonderful work with this picture!
All the best to you in this contest here.
Thanks a lot for sharing it!
Jeremy0826 -
Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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okay if you're not at home then exactly where are you my friend? being nosey aren't I.... shhh guess you don't have to tell me if you don't want to. Shhhh. (hehhehe)
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