She is only seen
when the moon is full
and the flowers are all in bloom.
She is a beauty
of this there is no doubt.
She walks
placing one delicate foot
in front of the other
in search of something
she wants
she needs.
She only pauses
in her lonely walk
when she senses something
a sound,
a smell,
a thought.
She knows not what.
She only knows
that she needs.
Author notes
I credit this picture to this contest. I forgot the link tho. Thanks for letting me use it.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest.. You Up For The Challenge?? by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended October 20, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great work!! Awesome Imagery!!
Good luck in the contest!! Peace, Cyn 
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I liked that.. Puts the mind to wondering...
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you did an excellent job with this prompt. I love your poem. its beautiful. I really love the third stanza in particular.
I do need to mention there was a word limit 40 - 60 words.. you went over by 12. but other than that this is a beautiful piece.
good luck
kat
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Beautiful and very well thought out.
Lovely work here and always a pleasure
to read you! All the best to you in this
contest my friend!
Jeremy0826
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This is beautiful - tired pfffffffff -I think this is fantastic - best of luck in the contest
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How many needs can one be fter? The lines of beauty and the picture painted woud make any man wish to fulfill all those needs. Tantalizing write poet.
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Wonderful
Very creative take on the image. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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