"Do you know what it's like
to hear voices in your head?
Its very annoying to always be
listening to things unsaid," Amber said.
AMBER! SHUT UP!!! This is my poem,
not yours! And anyway...it's supposed
to be free verse, not rhyme. Idiot...
Hi people, I'm Katie.
Yeah, just ignore that first part,
if you can, that was just Amber,
my little voice inside my head.
"I just explained that." Amber said.
I SAID SHUT UP! As I was saying,
before I was rudely interrupted,
Amber interrupts me a lot.
I think she does it just to annoy me.
"Oh my gosh! You're so smart Katie!
You figured that out all by yourself!"
Look, Amber, do you want to write this?
Or do you want me to?
"Hello? Moron. You have schizophrenia,
not a multiple personality disorder!
I can't control you're body, I can just
annoy you until you go insane.
So you're going to have to write the poem.
And by the looks of it, you're not doing so well..."
Well then stop talking so I can work on it!
Anyway, being schizophrenic is ---
"On top of spaghetti,
All covered with cheese,
I lost my poor meatball,
when somebody ----"
AHHHH! I GIVE UP!!!
"Wait... What'd I do?"
Author notes
ehhh...not that good. sorry. hard topic to write on...
P.S. I AM NOT SCHIZOPHRENIC!!! It was just a prompt. lol.
option 30 "rainbows and butterflies"
A contest entry
- Random, Weird, and Hilarious Contest by writeroftoast.
900 points, ended November 26, 2008, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In The Mind... by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended November 29, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
i really liked this becuase your wrote in in their mind as the contest ask
a very well written write gave insite to the person,
i really liked the spagetti part, really made you feel she was being almost taken over
great job
(ps. please add what i asked to the author notes without the key words i can not give more then hm.) -
This is quite funny. I thought you really were schizophrenic.
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The first part- I am in love with the first part, it kind of has a...sobering feel to it
The second part- Is very entertaining, and I like it because although it's very humerous, it also has a kind of subtle hint has to just how dark and disturbing schizophrenia really is.
Great work, thanks for submitting
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the second part is hilarious!!!! 
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This was really funny. I loved the argument between Amber and Katie. It seemed realistic in an alternate reality sort of way. Great entry! Good luck in the contest!
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On top of spaghetti,
All covered with cheese,
I lost my poor meatball!
That song is funny. This is excellent... The first poem is great ay
~lae
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hah. It bent a little to the humerous side but thats ok, sometimes serious can be very humerous indeed
and yes that would be very annoying if two people were always talking at the same time -
that does seem like a challenge. lolz. but u did great on it. lolz. awesome job and thanx for entering!
*hugs* tay/tessa.
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I've got one for you
your poems seem to be generally happy and usually based on love as in Because I love you,
so I want you to do a poem about skitzofrenia.
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