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My Minds Grove

I walk to the hallow among the groves
With my spell book, my wand aglow

In the hallow
Shadows watch
As I cast my spells
And plan my plots

I open my book
As I sit on a stump
And flip through some pages to the page which shall be read

My spell is simple
Yet packs a punch
Here it is, but be warned, it may affect you too

"To those of you who laugh at me
Who never know I've admit defeat
This spell shall take you to a world
Where you shall suffer, and scream like girls"

"I send you to my minds dark grove
Where if you reside
You're sure to die
Enjoy your stay, while you're alive
And remember
In my grove, it's always night"

My spell whisper through the trees
To the ears of those who it be cast upon
Sending them to my minds grove

Author notes

I know this makes no sense, but I wanted to enter this contest, and I tried my best.

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Comments


  • Darkwell
    October 26, 2008

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    This banishing charm is particularly stirring as the reader sends you like a memory into their own minds Brillient! My attention was kept as the writer warns the reader about the consequences of reading the charm

    "I send you to my minds dark grove
    Where if you reside
    You're sure to die
    Enjoy your stay, while you're alive
    And remember
    In my grove, it's always night"

    Brillient!

    This student wins a rememberall so they will never forget those who have fallen to their charms and 10 points will be awarded to ravenclaw


  • glitterydoom
    October 26, 2008

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    it does make sense, or it does to me...should I be scared? jks

    another great write
    and good luck in the contest
    your sugar sister