Under a gilded moon we danced,
In a golden circle of infinity,
Stars twinkling above glanced
At us dancing rhythmically
To the tune of sweet amour;
You bewitched me with your eyes
suspending me in a trance
Your eyes penetrating my soul did hypnotize
With the magic of your essence;
Underneathe a gilded moon
We spun in enchanted circles
Lost forever in the tune
Of love sung by some cosmic choir.
You have bewitched me body and soul, and I love you,
With a love so deep it cuts through my very essence
With just a touch and a kiss so warm and true
My body enthralled in a potent trance.
Our lips, by a strange magnetic force
Bond together in a kiss
My heart cannot help but wonder
What spell brought me to this state of bliss;
You've bewitched me most profoundly
With your warlock's curse
Your spell has captured me
In a hyptonic trance
Underneathe the gilded moon
We spin in a cirlcle of infinity
And In a delirious swoon
Under a sky of deep velvet blue
I whisper feverishly that I love you!
Author notes
"I did not harm any animals in the writing of this spell"
A contest entry
- CAST A SPELL ON ME by Darkwell.
2092 points, ended October 31, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Class, I want you all to see what a wonderful job was done on Spell Bound. Like a fine Petronus charm the writer concentrated the theme and kept control of it and was able to focus on it.
Underneathe a gilded moon
We spun in enchanted circles
Lost forever in the tune
Of love sung by some cosmic choir.
What lovely imagery
this piece has such a beautiful tone and passion and a lyrical quality. this student wins a pass to hogsmead village and a discount coupon for honeydukes and 10 points to hufflepuff
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thumbs up
tactile \i could feel your words
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