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The task from cupid

Baby wipe away your tears and dry your beautiful eyes,
I know you have heard this all before but girl,
If you were mine I would care share and tell you no lies,

I would be there for to you until the very end,
You remind me of an angel with broken wings,
Each conversation we have no matter its my heart that always sings.

If you let me girl I will repair those wings and help you find heaven,
Because that where a girl as special you belongs,
No tell me girl where was cupid hiding a girl like you,
When love was hard to find in year eleven,

I am here to put the sunshine back into your rainy day,
In my heart I keep my feelings for you in a special place,
And pinky that is where I'd like them to stay.

Those other guys I have seen you with,
Have hurt and broke your heart,
I have had feelings for you since I met you at college
From the end to the very start,

 

If you were mine I would treat you like the queen,

You are in my eyes and adore you,

My first prioity will be to make you happy and I will put no other girl before you,

 

In a dream the task from cupid was read out clear,

I had to rescue you from the sadness and hold you oh so dear 

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 26, 2008

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    aww this is such a sweet and beautiful write. so innocent and cute! keep penning, i loved this write


  • Shannon62875
    October 20, 2008
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    awww

    I dont know who this is about but damn if this was to me... i wouldnt let you go... This is a very cute write... And im glad to hear that you actuallly feel this way for a girl... You care for her so much to write bout it.... I wouldnt let you slip away... this girl is crazy... Keep u the great work!

    Shannon*Leah


  • Mgreen
    October 20, 2008

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    "No tell me girl where was cupid hiding a girl like you,
    When love was hard to find in year eleven, " My fav. line, and a great guy for writing something so sweet