You inspire in so many
ways
You lift me up
so I don't drift away
You hold my hand
so I don't trip and fall
You say things that uplift me
even if its just a call
I love you so,
and thank you much
for helping me through it all
You are my light
from long ago,
You are my aunt
that helps me grow
Even though you are far
far away
You will always be
my aunt renee'
Author notes
This song is obviously to my aunt renee' who helps me through sooo much!
I love you and can't wait to see you soon!
Option 1
"She will be loved"
A contest entry
- Poems of Inspiration by Riftkin.
700 points, ended October 24, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My Best Friend by DarknessOfSanity.
900 points, ended November 20, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspiration - Celebrating my Fifth year on allpoetry by me alone.
700 points, ended January 7, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think or what could I improve!
Comments
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this is beautiful. what a wonderful dedication to your aunt renee. great work. Thank you for sharing with me and entering the contest but you've already won a trophy. Unfortunately I must remove this from the contest because it breaks my rules. Kahy
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Paradise found in Aunty Renee
Well said, well done
Thank you, good luck
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Beautiful poem, Im sure she loves it as she loves you. What a great bond you have. Always a blessed kind of bond.
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Thank you!
Well, she really does help me through soooo much! I am glad you all enjoyed it! -
I wish to thank you for your words of inspiration.
I am honored that you wrote for my contest.
Thank you very much.
Riftkin
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Thanks Riftkin!
I am honored to have won honorable mention! Your contest was great, and look forward to signing up for another superb contest of yours!
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I know what you are talking about.
She does help you A LOT!!!
With absolutely anything you need.
You should let her read this or read it to her some time.
Great write.
I Love it.
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Thanks sis! I love ya -
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she sounds like a dear Aunt
my Aunty Betty was one so dear too
they are so precious
thankyou for sharng this and for bringing her to mind
s
Lib x x
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