Swimming in the waters that one fishes in
oh, what a perfect thrill
Nothing like the lure
of a country meal deal
Lost in the spaciousness
starry nights of glee
Makes for the bright days
of early eternity.
Wandering in the fields
of the moistened clean dirt
Aware of the luxury
drawn in the element's mirth
Cast forth like sunshine
mind free to roam
never to get lost
for you're forever home.
Days spread out like lily fields of white
Troubles held in tow, far away
No need for filteration's advance
your stream's pure everyday
Neighbors warm and friendly
perched to do you good
from their hearts of goodness
its all so understood.
A contest entry
- All the cowgirls shakin' their sassafras ~ Holler Back ~ Down Home Poetry (open now to PWs) by Xianaria.
900 points, ended December 7, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank you for entering ~
Beautifully written with colorful imagery. I enjoyed the comfort flowing through your words.
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A great discription of a great place to be, both in physical and mental. Very poetic and happy! Pleasant to read,makes the reader smile.
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I love to plant smiles
thanks Z lol
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What a lovely poem you've written. I think a lot of youngsters today, don't even know what we're talking about. Good luck in the contest.
~Titia~
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So true, some things appear past discovery...thanks so much lol
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