here you are,
worshipping me
again, as i pretend
to care, planting
flowers.
hours of ridiculous
sexual acts and the
lack of privacy.
these things i
won't say-
1.grow the fuck
up,
such a horrible
i-don't-love-you
way of being. seeing
you for the pussy you
are.
2.I'm far from caring
3.stop staring at the
mirror that way, I'm okay
and mediocre-ly good
looking. and there are
worse things than th-
4.is it what you
wanted? me to play
lover and mother to
your blondblueeyed
so good ending...
5.I'm spending my
life with you, and
it's true-
I've circumcised
my decision;
6.that i love,love
you
but i hate
this goddamn religion
Author notes
yeah, so this is another personal poem. it's aggravating.
A contest entry
- this is an interview. by Diseased Mind.
700 points, ended October 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice is welcome
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iLikethis
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wow! what religion are you??? ... this is powerful !!! i think you should win!!!
1.grow the fuck
up,
such a horrible
i-don't-love-you
way of being. seeing
you for the pussy you
are.
2.I'm far from caring
3.stop staring at the
mirror that way, I'm okay
and mediocre-ly good
looking. and there are
worse things than th-
4.is it what you
wanted? me to play
lover and mother to
your blondblueeyed
so good ending...
These reasonings are amazingly written and bring me to understand a bit about the other side ... GOOD LUCK!!!
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whoa.
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yep.
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You seem aggravated. Surely you're not angry at/about something?
Also, how are you? Long time no chat! -
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lol maybe a little at times. And I'm good. School is awesome, though sometimes it can be overwhelming. how have you been?
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Good to hear that school is going well! You'll slowly get used to the workload, so don't sweat that.
I've been alright; going back to school as well and still working. It ain't easy, but oh well.
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