Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Rapture.

 

 

 

To be poetically
wed to Amera,
is akin to
sprinkles on a donut,
giggles on a baby's face,
whipped cream on pumpkin pie.


Sweet, intensely unique,
gut clenching pleasure at
the very thought
of such a union.

A shoulder like a
pillow soft boulder
for her to lean on
when she is sad.


Delving often into
the deep lure of her eyes
and  succumbing in the 
wonders found there.

Finger-painting

smiles both

horizontal and vertical,
on her lips and flesh.


Intimate secrets
whispered endearingly,
as I pluck the
flower of Amera.


Gently pulling her
pink petal of bliss
between my lips,
as she murmurs

and sighs,
"He loves me,
He loves me hot."

Intelligence blended
with an enchantment that
deprives one of any other dreams.


Eyes that can tease ,

a rock to dance,
and educate in
a single glance.


Late night thoughts
un-bottled and

poured out,
as two poets mingle
like paper and ink,
making sense from
the blankness
of existence alone.

Let us become
children again,
long lost pen pals,
scribbling dreams
and blowing kisses
to far away places.


Sharing the

commonality
of what's right,
what's written,
and  what is one

smitten by another.

I can't offer
you the world,
only a small,
canvassed collection,
of what I

have cherished,
rendered in

soft strokes.


Pigments of

the imagination,
soft pink pastels

that'll match
the blush

that appeared  
on your cheeks
in stanza three.

Not as skilled in
the technical aspects,
of the poetic arts,
as you have

always been
but perhaps

the grace of your

influence,
will gently brush
away the cobwebs,
of this poet's
shadowed images.

In exchange
for friendship,
some vivid bursts
of passion,
plenty of flowers
that bloom
in squiggles

and curves
between the bleached
remnants of trees,
that is my manifest,
as I seek a

companion-ship,
for a possible voyage,
across oceans
of possibilities,
to the island of Amera.

Let us sling
a pair of hammocks
between four palms extended
and bask in the warmth
of two sunlit faces,
sharing the joyous
webbed space,
found only above
such uncommon ground.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis



A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Rovingone gold member
    November 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love the idea of being pen pals sharing dreams and blowing kisses. That's just like being a child all over again and remembering what it was like when you just discovered there was such a thing as love. You do justice to the lady fair. Good luck in this contest sir.


  • echo-ink
    October 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    OMG~~~~This shouts "Pick Me, Pick Me"

    This was wonderful, and how can you resist the epic of the words in this?

    This made me smile broadly and chuckle, with a little ooh and aah throughout the whole read.

    [ Run your fingers through his hair, indeed, my friend, Amera.
    I'm so glad you have put this one in your finalists.]


    and may the best man win... for Amera deserves the very best! YESSA!

    Fantastic job on this, Artis...Good luck.

    Bell,


  • PerVirtuous
    October 21, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Impressive! Good luck.


  • Amera gold member
    October 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You really are the charmer! You started this poem off with my name and that made me feel like I was the only one in the world for you at the time you wrote it and that sucked me in big time. You really made me feel warm and special you said everything I wanted to hear and even touched on the erotic, just enough of a touch. It looks like there is a Cabana Boy high on my list.

    Love,
    Amera,

    PS if that’s your picture, I want to run my fingers through your hair.


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 20, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    well...it looks like my Cabana Boy may become a hubby... I like this poem to Amera. I especially
    like the photo beside Amera's...cute and clever. I
    wish you well. Love, Lane

1 - 5 of 5