I wake in the morning
Just like the day before
I hear the silence
And miss you even more
I head out of house
With the sun shining above
I cannot feel it's warmth
Not without your love
At the park
I see the empty swings
They were your favorite
You said it gave you wings
Now you really do have them
And so does your dad
I cry every day
I am always so sad
I went from being
A happy mom and wife
To what I have now
Just an empty life
Author notes
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A contest entry
- B&W Photo Prompt Contest by Girl With Guitar.
700 points, ended October 30, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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I love that this actually tugged at my hearts strings.
Excellent write, beautifully simple whilst saying so much.
Thank you for the entry. -
If you broke this poem down to four line stanzas it would help the flow of this poem As for the content of the poem if this is ture i am sorry for your loss I am posting a link to a poem I wrote that may give you some comfort LOL Bill
Little Angle
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4260205
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