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Good Bye Never Happens.



    So you are leaving us and traveling
on your own.
You have chosen your life's path,
taking on adventures that will lead
you to the unknown.


    And although tears will be shed
for your parting, know that you
will always be on my heart and mind
and you are a dear friend.


    I will miss our little chats
and flirting banters.
But know that when you return,
I will be here waiting with open
arms.

So instead of saying good- bye
and thinking that I will never see you again,
I shall wish you Godspeed and the
best things in life to come your way.
For in my heart, Good-Bye Never Happens.

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  • Awwww

    That is a beautiful poem, I am sure the muse to this is smiling somewhere.


  • BlancetNoir gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    Very sweet words of love. Nice sentiment. Thanks for entering.


  • condor gold member
    November 4, 2008
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    Beautiful write. I don't know this friend of yours but i am damned sure he must be a wonderful person, because you are his friend. This was absolutely delightful. I love the way you said that this wasn't good-bye and wished him Godspeed. It was glorious. You write so well and with such conviction. Great read indeed.


  • Tercil gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Reading this, I am now regretting even posting this, and just disappearing. This is heartaching to read, knowing it is for me, and for that reason, I owe you a return. On the personal note, I don't expect many will leave comment, because I'd like to think this unique.