My sanity lingers in your hands
Waiting for you to destroy it
To rip it apart and throw it to the dirt
For you to walk away
Wiping your rememberence of me
On a dirty napkin; tossing it to the ground
But
Instead you tease me
You tease my sanity
Make me believe you want me
That you need and cant live without me
You have me believe that you love me
Then you show me how much of a fool I am
And
You set my sanity on the ground gently
Look me in the eyes, grinning like an idiot
And you stomp your foot on it
Breaking me completely.
I crumble to the ground
Screaming out the last of my sanity
A contest entry
- Time to Go by Tercil.
500 points, ended November 4, 2008, 11 entries
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wow, surely, I didn't do this? It is for reasons similar to this that really, I leave with a broken heart, and incidently, whoever you are. I feel bad for reading this, cos I look in the mirror ans see the same thing.
really sad reading the truth I guess. But, from a poetic point of view, it really gets to you, a piece like this. I dont know if I am hated or loved now.,
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im glad you enjoyed the poem thank you for commenting it, it is the first comment i got in a while. so i thank you.
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