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Surprise, lover.

I was positive
and you saw it through.

The hints of light shining
on your face were enough
for it to commit a memory.

I knew it was going to happen
eventually...

I did not have a doubt on my tongue,
and even now,
    amidst reminders of acute pain
a subtle smile meets my lips.

My one gift
    and I missed your birthday.

We didn't fuse
  and I even scared you

but out of our wits came
an imperfect situation
that has more beauty

than your words.

Something shared,
  never transformed into
the blasphemy 1000s of neurons cook up.





I'm forever yours,
                  in one way or another.

Caught in a cushioned bubble,
where falling and standing

are the same.

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10/15/08

No longer the same.
I got my change.

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