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Lonesome Running Road

Longing for the forbidden kiss

Over the forgotten veil

Not to be in this wandering bliss

Even with the terrible trail

Sometimes I wish that I could be there

Only to realize that I am not

Maybe that veil will lift one day

Ever to be forgot.

 

Running through the misty forest

Upon your back I do go

Now you are gone 

Now I wish to die

In this little town that does nothing but cry

Now I wish for that one little bite

Getting me what I wish of  you.

 

Rise upon the softest kiss

Only to find that it is but a dream

All I wish for is your return

Dreaming of this I constantly do.

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I don't know if this makes much sense but it is the way it came out. It is an acrostic I do hope you like it because I DON"T lol

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  • trekkergirl
    October 28, 2008

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    It's okay. I like a dream of a perfect kiss and only realizing that the perfect kiss you feel is a dream. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest. You use imagery well here.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    i love this you really did a great awesome job with this it was a pleasure good luck in the contest


  • Titus gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    I loved this, and I shall honour this by turning it into a sonnet, I promise, Lovely words, and judging really will be an anticlimax, really, Loved this.