I don't want to say "goodbye", don't want to say we're over.
I know I love you so much that I cannot dare to forget you and cheat on you.
I did all the sacrifices and pain just for you to be happy.
I risk everything, forget the whole world and myself just to be with you...
And now, you left me all alone and blue, without any clue...
Never left me any explanations why all of a sudden you've changed.
You don't even want to talk to me, so how can i tell you..."we're over"...
A contest entry
- this is an interview. by Diseased Mind.
700 points, ended October 30, 2008, 19 entries
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thank you for this contest and thanks for the applause.
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Better now than later
Love is a funny thing and sometimes it is lust instead of love. You don't really know sometimes till it's over. When you are young in love, it is the atteaction that sparks the flame and that spark can go out. When you grow older the spark is not as strong and it takes more to light the fire, but the fire still burns hot. Keep your chin up, your much to pretty to be alone long! I Love Ya! Shaker
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yeah .. thanks for your comment
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It's a very emotional write. I can feel the anguish seeping through
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thank you so much i appreciate all your comments...thanks mwah....
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Such a tough place to be. Well written.
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WOW!
This was a very well written write!!! I really enjoyed reading this. You expressed your emotions very good in such a short little poem... Keep up the great. I hope things work out for you... Good luck in the contest
Shannon*Leah -
Boy can I understand this one. It's hard to get the last word if that person won't even talk to you. And boy do I have to have that last word. I mean really guys come on.
Great write
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