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Path to Fresh Pastures


 

Time and 'Chance' have combined to undo
Intense events bred bending flame
Through causal links threading into
Unexpected departure - Time's claim
Signals null and void all the past drew-
Tread turning one head its aim.

That regrets should cascade feelings blue
Is too sad, what begun with acclaim
To tangent spins onwards to view
Unexpected alternative frame
Showing path to fresh pastures, take cue
Totally independant of blame.

The future shows rainbow, glows too
Indicating new way, may proclaim
Tale trailblazing amazing and true,
Unhindered, life never the same -
Scarlets, greens, of harmonious hue -
Touching strange, exchange change for life's game.

Those who soul-song soft-strong would pursue
In new race found profound, to reclaim
Time lost at a cost paid by few.
Universal encouragements name
Success Time shall never subdue,
Trace team winning through twinning dreams new.

Thus hope flows, scope's arrow flies true,
Inhibiting obstacles lame
Transform to spark lighting dark through
Uncertainty, troubles may tame.
Song burns bright, to light turns, earned by few,
Triumphant tomorrows proclaim.

Tide turns, finger beckons, renew
Idylls ideal and rich which enflame
Those energies longing to brew
Unlimited open refrain -
Spreading positive thoughts in its train
To cares solve, doubts dissolve - what a coup !

Termination : rebirth should ensue,
Invitation to stimulate brain
Tingling heart for fresh start, gladness grew
Uniquely entrancing, the same,
Shall expand newfoundland to review
Theme inspired, gleam seems fired, so ... Adieu !

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  • I think that this must be a very deep write. I do know that your imagery is excellent. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Whoever you are, I am happy you're my Friend & that you share your incredible depths with us all. I see Tony was duly impressed, as was I. Of course.


  • Tercil gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    wow! Termination : rebirth should ensue, I think I may come back just to comment on this note to all messages, well done, I am lost for words.

  • Tercil gold member
    October 20, 2008
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    x whoever you are. awww