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They march


Hence the hearts agree
To start a journey of forever
Tying the souls of them with a ribbon
A ribbon of endless vows and goals
And thus they march in the road of life
Heading to what is called heaven
Agreeing
To share tears, laughter and blood
With him watching from far above
Leading the steps of these two hearts
Wizening the minds, polishing the feet
And thus only then shall the train
Reach the station
Of a forever blooming heaven

Yet the journey never ends

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Contest prompt:
Love is a endless journey of the two hearts...Unknown.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 3, 2008

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    You took the road and had your lovely journey of you sweet muse..I am impressed my friend..well done...and thanks for the entry...


  • MD Masroor
    October 20, 2008

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    And thus only then shall the train
    Reach the station
    Of a forever blooming heaven


    That line was beyond beautiful. Such serenity in those words that I actually felt like dying just so that I can go on that train. Yay! Train! Ahem. Anyways, with strong words, you really caught the readers attention. Keep it up!


  • chilali
    October 20, 2008

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    Great entry into this contest hon! This was a beautiful write indeed. Best to you in the contest And thank you for sharing!