We've only known each other
For just a little while
Yet I know I love you
You give to me a smile
Love is an endless journey
Of the two hearts..yours and mine
Shall we see where they will take us
Throughout the ages of time
If you truly love me
Then our Journey will be full
We shall stand the test of time
And love will be our golden rule
So take my hand my darling
Your wedding ring I'll proudly wear
As we walk along through life
A life we gladly share
A contest entry
- the two hearts... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the warm atmosphere of the lines ...which are truly sweet to feel and to expereinceas as well ..well done....
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Thank you PrabhuDayal for reading my poem and for your kind comment. so glad you enjoyed my poem.
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So Sweet and Caring
Oh Katie you poem is so full of love the way love should be. Lovely flow and rhyme. Always a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you sweet Sandy. You always have a kind word for everyone. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Katie
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Katie this is so beautiful and so full of true love and romance, thanks for sharing my dear friend and good luck in the contest
Theresa
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Thank you Tawk for your kind comment on my poem. Give our little Pumpkin a kiss for me and tell her I love her. Katie
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Lovely! You always present something gentle and filled with hope.
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Thank you Wolfie, your comments are always welcome and appreciated.
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