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Never Goodbye

Never a goodbye can end
the time in mortal time was spend,
for every word and every wish
are shadows of Eternal Kiss.

Let we in time then understand
the timelessness of Ever-end,
and take each day, being blue or bliss,
as lessons learned, from Higher Hand.

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Inspired but also gifted to you, Cheryl, as a token of Timeless Love.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    A Wonderful Token...

    I'm sure Cheryl will love it. Thank you for sharing your thoughtfully kind heart. Wishing all the best to you! Take care, Peace.


  • Cannonsfire
    October 22, 2008

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    Such beautiful words my friend. C


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 21, 2008

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    always a perfect flow, always a message from your pen, the last two lines spoke peace to my mind
    reminding me I must be still when I don't know what to do. Thank you for being here, your a blessing to all.
    I wish you luck in the contest pretty poetess


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Perfect flow and rhyme...this is beautiful and so true...so powerful in brevity...excellent and so sweet, dear soul...best to you!
    sis


  • Janice M Pickett
    October 20, 2008

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    VERY TRUE..Well said. Short verse can be so powerful. excellent


  • PerVirtuous
    October 20, 2008
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    Very beautiful and timely. You are precious, Myra.


  • chilali
    October 20, 2008

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    I loved this! Especially the rhyme! The entire poem flows so well. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest. Thank you for sharing


  • SilverQ
    October 20, 2008
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    wow, great rhyme and everything! Three thumbs up!

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