gray stairs from the staff room
take a trail
to new november
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as she sings
the fence creaks,
and the wind breaks a branch
a poem writes itself somewhere -
laughing to the sound
of her name
Author notes
argh i don't know
A contest entry
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Comments
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beautiful ending -
this was quite abstract reading, and yet, putting it in the catagory of the title, it makes perfect sense for it is but thoughts - as is a journal entry!
thanks for entering
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yeah... you kick ass. im not quite sure who to blame for my not knowing to read your stuff. im not taking the fall. ill blame my sister. im sure she hasnt taken a fall in a while. lol
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i miss you
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this is so quiet. stills the mind when you read it.
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I actually really enjoyed this - it was very creatively done - best of luck in the contest
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this reads so sad to me...
love the visuals of the branch breaking...I hear her singing a sad song...
lovely, as always
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the poem found its way to this page and it's lovely...loved the mood here, and the visuals. you should write more...!
~ Nicolette
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