Just one is too many for me
I hate taking any of them
But this one helps with my B/P
And so does that one there
But I also must take one you see
to keep my arthritis under control
I'm not a coward, I'll never be
I just can't take the pain anymore
This little one is to set me free
from all the depression that I get
This stops my legs wandering aimlessly
They say that you are what you eat
My guess is I'm quite a pill sometimes
A contest entry
- Addiction by poetryality.
900 points, ended November 14, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful final line! Not always does a poem with category of "humor" bring it. This one does. Excellent delivery, I still have this silly grin pasted on my face Thanks
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Oh, excellent sis....you painted your wonderful words right across the picture prompt with such ease. Bravo and well done. Good luck in the contest with this fab entry
Love ya loaaaads!
Shaz xx
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Bravo!
Indeed you may become a pill!
Well done!
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