The perfect snowflakes glisten
Brightened by the morning sun
My heart is contentedly warmed
By fluffy clouds as yet unformed
The patch of grass over there
Each blade feels as smooth as hair
Rain is soft, sensual, and cool
Not irritating, or distracting, by rule
Whether I look left or right
There’s no misery in sight
Sunrise, sunset, night or day,
My place, my dreams, my way.
Author notes
FUNKY CHICKEN (of course!)
Option 3:
Write me a poem about and IMAGINARY place you would like to go. Make me feel like i'm there!
I generally go here (in my head, of course!!! If only there was such a place!) when I am angry, and to me it's pretty, what I imagine it to be anyway!! 
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I'd like to go here too; it sounds so calming and peaceful! Can I come??
Thanks for entering -
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Yeah, I think I could deal with a few hours there from time to time!
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It sounds like an awesome place! If only it were real...
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Nicely writtten I do like the attitude in this poem. Especially when you say "my way" good write. I like this. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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oh wow this was beautiful! lolz. ur imaginary is wonderful. thanx for entering and good luck!
*hugs* tay/tess.
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Oh, the imagery. i love love love imagery. it is my number one favorite thing and the one thing i look out for. the way you described everything was so perfect and descriptive. amazing.
thanks so much for entering
<3
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