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Gave Up

So I gave up
Gave in
Fell back into
The old way
Of living my life
With a fuck you
On my lips
And yet another
Scar upon my wrists
So I gave up
Over three years
Of hard work
Of breaking that habit
So I gave into
The dark thoughts
In the back of
My mind
That doesn't make me
A bad person
Right?

Author notes

2008

So yeah- Maybe I was wrong on the whole cutting is bad thing.

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  • just4fun20
    November 20, 2008

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    wow very good

    no it dont make u a bad person ive been off for a year now and today like many others ive had a really bad day and wish i could go back but just think of the people in your life that want you to stop and it helps but not allway everyone slips up once in a while you just got to remind yourself that tho it may make you feel better now your problems are still there and the only way to get them out of your head is to talk to someone about it. anyways your poem flowed very good like


  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    October 20, 2008

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    It's really hard to quit cuttting, and I've relapsed many times. It doesn't make you a bad person, everyone has their vices. Anyway, I though the poem flowed nicely and I really enjoyed reading it.

    XXCrimsonRaineXX